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JW.org Childrens Page: Expanding My Circle Of Friends
by pale.emperor inhttps://www.jw.org/en/bible-teachings/family/teenagers/worksheets/expanding-circle-of-friends/.
some things of note here, it looks to me that they're encouraging young ones to befriend older people and "people not like them".
could this be because many of the young ones are now leaving?.
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JW.org Childrens Page: Expanding My Circle Of Friends
by pale.emperor inhttps://www.jw.org/en/bible-teachings/family/teenagers/worksheets/expanding-circle-of-friends/.
some things of note here, it looks to me that they're encouraging young ones to befriend older people and "people not like them".
could this be because many of the young ones are now leaving?.
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Regarding the quotations, from Emily, et al.
Do children really talk (write) like that? Better spoken (written) than many adults!
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Good Morning!
by snowbird ingood morning, all.. it is good to be here.. thanks to all for your contributions.. love and blessings.
sylvia.
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Went to Australia -- 14 hours on Quantas, and that was only part of the journey. It was a bad time to have "tummy troubles" . . .
Never was so happy to deplane.
Best.
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Good Morning!
by snowbird ingood morning, all.. it is good to be here.. thanks to all for your contributions.. love and blessings.
sylvia.
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Good Morning!
by snowbird ingood morning, all.. it is good to be here.. thanks to all for your contributions.. love and blessings.
sylvia.
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Have a lovely day, Sylvia, et al!
Blessings and Peace.
A "six-dog week" for me! Fortunately, not all of them at once!
Mom kept extensive, detailed journals. She enumerated all her jobs, as a "'Jean' of all trades." Well, I'm "Jack"!
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Do you know about dialogue tags and action beats?
by compound complex ingreetings, fellow posters:.
before i give my own answer to the above, kindly read this silly little mother/daughter scenario i came up with for the writing class i teach.
it has to do with how to write more effectively.. thanks!.
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Nancy and Sylvia could work together as a writing team . . .
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Do you know about dialogue tags and action beats?
by compound complex ingreetings, fellow posters:.
before i give my own answer to the above, kindly read this silly little mother/daughter scenario i came up with for the writing class i teach.
it has to do with how to write more effectively.. thanks!.
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Thanks, Nancy!
Yours is a good example of interspersing dialogue with narrative. You are showing what's happening and readers get a sense of the relationship between mom and daughter.
Good show!
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Do you know about dialogue tags and action beats?
by compound complex ingreetings, fellow posters:.
before i give my own answer to the above, kindly read this silly little mother/daughter scenario i came up with for the writing class i teach.
it has to do with how to write more effectively.. thanks!.
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You're welcome, Syl!
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Do you know about dialogue tags and action beats?
by compound complex ingreetings, fellow posters:.
before i give my own answer to the above, kindly read this silly little mother/daughter scenario i came up with for the writing class i teach.
it has to do with how to write more effectively.. thanks!.
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OUTLAW:
Good one. Yeah, she'll still be ugly!*********************
Sylvia:
Excellent!
Inexperienced writers think "he said," "she asked" become so boringly repetitive that they must tart up the dialogue tags with insane examples, such as I used in the first entry. Nix the adverbs.
Example 2, and your fine writing, do more to show, rather than tell, what the characters are thinking and/or doing. The simple and recommended dialogue tags (said/asked) actually become "invisible," unhampered by overuse of "Tom Swifties":
I need a pencil sharpener," said Tom bluntly."Oops! There goes my hat!" said Tom off the top of his head."I can no longer hear anything," said Tom deftly."I have a split personality," said Tom, being frank."This must be an aerobics class," Tom worked out."I couldn't believe there were 527,986 bees in the swarm!" Tom recounted."Don't you know my name?" asked Tom swiftly."Your fly is undone," was Tom's zippy rejoinder."I only have diamonds, clubs and spades," said Tom heartlessly."Don't add too much water," said Tom with great concentration."I wonder if there's a number between seven and nine," said Tom considerately."I manufacture tabletops for shops," said Tom counter-productively."It's not fair!" said Tom darkly."I haven't had any tooth decay yet," said Tom precariously. -
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Do you know about dialogue tags and action beats?
by compound complex ingreetings, fellow posters:.
before i give my own answer to the above, kindly read this silly little mother/daughter scenario i came up with for the writing class i teach.
it has to do with how to write more effectively.. thanks!.
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OUTLAW:
Great, as usual! THANKS!
Just thought of a real-life scene between Winston Churchill and Lady Astor (I think):
"If you were my husband, I'd give you poison!"
"If you were my wife, I'd drink it!"